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RGRE - Reversed Gender Roles Equestria Anonymous 04/18/2025 (Fri) 18:09:16 No. 24053
Cozy New Day edition Previous Thread: https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/42056098 Fauster's Story Archive: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1XiJRe1NWl_kIoWsHssZ27BMV7bZAe1jgX59-dWggYkA/ Uh-hmmm's Prompt Archives: https://ponepaste.org/1046 Have a broken Pastebin link? Replace pastebin.com with poneb.in Remember: not to save anything of value on Pastebin ignore all attempts at early new threads ignore new threads by the cheerimac poster I am not the usual anon who makes the new threads
>>30511 You still write! I'm glad to see you again.
>>30511 The writing style of this green kind of reminds me of Dune's. Almost expected Amira to start talking about the spice trade. Definitely an interesting addition to the thread.
>>30558 She probably does know about the spice trade, and how those filthy griffons keep stealing the salt.
>>30511 I have missed your writing a great deal, I'm so happy that you've back and able to post again.
>>30518 >Sunburst lets out a brief sigh as he shuts the book he'd been orating from >"Now," Sunburst adjusts his glasses, "You've got a taste of the theory." "A taste?" >Sunburst just smiles at that >He's been droning from that book for hours now >The book levitates back into its slot on the shelf >"Time for a taste of practice." >A feather rises from somewhere beneath the table and rests where the book once did >You glance between the feather and Sunburst, then back to the feather >You give it a tentative nudge with a hoof >Seems to be an ordinary white feather "Practice how?" >"You're going to...levitate this feather!" >Sunburst grins like he just bought you a new car "...That it?" >Sunburst's face twitches >"I-I know, it might not be...glamorous-" "It's a feather, Sunburst." >Sunburst huffs softly and pushes up his glasses >"Foal steps, Anonymous. Just, humor me." >You feel like you humor him plenty >"First, I want you to focus on the feather." >It seemed like a perfectly normal feather >Actually, too perfect >It's like a feather you'd see in a cartoon >"Now, imagine you have an invisible hoof." >"Imagine that hoof reaching out and lifting up the feather." >Sunburst cups his hooves together and raises them up as he instructs you >You zone in on the feather >You keep trying to imagine like Sunburst told you >You can almost visualize a third hoof reaching out from your horn >Your forehead is feeling kinda warm >Must be your magic >You can see in your mind's eye, the mental hoof is passing through the table and beneath the feather >Wait, if that's what your magic feels like- >Upupup! Focus, Anon >You think you can feel the feather on your mindhoof >The feather nudges >Almost there >Your face is starting to hurt from how hard you're scrunching, but you can't give up now >The feather nudges again >You close your eyes to concentrate harder >Almost... >The image of the horse with the upside down face blinks in your mind, but you feel a flash of heat at your horn before you can fully process it >Was that it? >You open your eyes again >The feather's blue now >You look to Sunburst >He's glaring inquisitively at the feather >"That's...not supposed to happen." Sorry for the wait. Updates should (hopefully) come more regularly in the future
>>30790 >Green >At this time of year? >At this time of day? >In this part of the internet? >Localized entirely within this thread? Love to see it Anon. Thanks for sharing.
>>30790 >"Maybe it's...? No, I don't, um..." >Sunburst whines quietly as he tosses aside the book he was flipping through and cracks open another, muttering to himself some more as he ruffles through pages >You glance around at the chaos around you >The once pristine little library is now a whirlwind of books and journals >Sunburst's brow hasn't relaxed since you turned the feather blue >You'd have gotten pretty bored by now if he hadn't provided you with this lovely juice box that you're now sipping from >You have no idea what "Zapapple Zinger" is supposed to be, but damn if it isn't good >Right when you slurp the last of your beverage, Sunburst faceplants into the book in front of him "So, uh..." >His ears unflatten themselves at the sound of your voice "Do I have cancer?" >That makes Sunburst's whole head perk up >"Hm?" "The whole feather thing. Does this mean I have...unicorn cancer?" >Sunburst doesn't answer immediately >"I'm sorry, Anonymous, what?" "Or horn cancer? Or is there, like, a magic organ that gets the cancer?" >Sunburst stares at you quietly again >A huff escapes him >Then another >It grows into mirthful, breathless chuckle >Who the fuck laughs at a kid with cancer? >"Oh, sweet Celestia. All that stress is just..." >Sunburst smiles at nothing, rubbing the side of his face with one hoof as he does a shooing gesture with the other >His gaze stays on you for a moment >Sunburst has that sort of reluctant smile that your Mom used to get when you did something stupid as a kid >You miss her, now that you think about it >"We're going to have to take another trip today." >Sunburst's horn twinkles and the library begins collecting itself "Where?" >"We have to go to my work." >You didn't even know Sunburst was employed "Why?" >"Because, I have no idea what's wrong with you." >Fuck, you do have cancer -=-=- "This...is it?" >"Mhm!" >You and Sunburst were standing in the courtyard of a massive crystal castle >The same one you've seen in the distance every time you went outside in this place >You always figured it was some government building "Are you, like...a librarian?" >Sunburst chuckles >"If only. Come on." >Sunburst heads for the castle's entrance, nudging you along with a bit of magic >"There's some ponies I want you to meet."
>The guests went back home. >Amira personally supervised them embarking. With three of you nearby. >Today, everyone once again were cheerful and informal. Amira even exchanged jokes with some of the closer relatives. You and colts too got many good wishes and fertility related jokes. >You are pretty sure though, that some, for example Alqua, still remained in the Palace. >During the dinnertime Amira took a break. You three had a nice dinner. >After you finished with the dinner, Ajmal went back to Gulzar and Alharara. Ahmed went to the library, to read some more poetry. >You consider what should you do. >Amira wasn't going anywhere, continuing to lay on her side. You think for a moment and decide that you do not want to return to your room as well. "Can I stay here with you, Amira?" >She flicks her ear. >"If you want to, suit yourself, dear." >You sit near some thick bush, lean on it and look up, admiring vast blue sky above. You just begin to think about where your home world possibly can be, when you hear surprised grunt. >You look to the side and there stands Alqua. Since you sat behind the bush she probably hasn't noticed you at first. >Amira quickly stands and nuzzles her. >"I wanted to tell a few things, but perhaps you are occupied." The old mare says. >"No, please do, grandma." Amira looks at you, with a hint of apology. >You get that. "If my lady allows, I would go to the fountain, to refresh myself a bit." >You stand and bow. >"Fetch me some too, dear." Says Amira, surprisingly enough and gives you her bowl, holding it with her teeth. >So, she wants you to return? Interesting. You take the bowl and go, turning around the hedge. >You approach the fountain, take a few sips, fill the bowl and contemplate if you should go back. After all, Amira let you know she expects you back. But is it wise to interrupt whatever the conversation you were asked to go away from? You wait a couple of minutes and then decide to slowly return. Approaching the picnic spot you overhear the words and stop. >"...Warrior families were completely in tow with it. The most prominent landowners too." >That's Amira speaking. >"The amount of seething was still pretty high." Alqua answers. >"What is important they understood they are in minority. Lands were sitting idle, growing with weeds, because those idiots would wait for the highest bidder to buy a lease." >"True that. But is it wise to alienate the wealth? They still paid the taxes." Alqua states. >"Artificial wealth. This has an unfortunate consequences of over-urbanization and Earth Kind losing connection to their land usually. And Unicorns becoming hoarders instead of warriors." Amira stomps. >"The states grow on wealth." >"The pile of gold grows. Even you, who is much stronger than me, cannot make a seed sprout on gold! We need more people and we need to feed them. We can import something additional but we need the bulk of fodder to sustain the population readily available! And we need population that can do something, not just collect coins and exchange them!" >Alqua sighs. "Dear, the Middle Lands..." >"Grandma, come on! They almost had wiped out each other before Equestria had shown up. Imperivm of Roam was a cruel and heretical joke in my opinion. You know what they practiced openly! I don't want to say that word. When cities grow untended-" >"That would take Equestrian Princess to tend cities like gardens." Alqua interjects. Apparently only she can get away with something like interrupting the Ruling Mother. >"Precisely. But we still can do some trimming here and there."
>There is a pause. Then Amira speaks up, in hushed tone. >"Grandma, you do know that some used external coinage to be able to measure the amount of added wealth properly?" >"Whose coinage?" Alqua's tone becomes alert. >"We are investigating that." >"You know, Ami," Alqua says after a much longer pause, "I'm glad back then other electors voted for you." >Amira laughs. >"Grandma, I know well you voted for me too, despite how hard you're trying to pretend otherwise." >"I'm not pretending. It was my point in debates, to let everyone imagine what would it be if it turns out we are wrong." >"You always do that. And I'm always thankful to you for that." >Alqua lets out a hoarse, hearty laugh. >Since they are silent after that, you approach and exit from the bush, presenting the bowl to Amira with a bow. >"Alright, I'll go supervise how they load our things on the cart. Later, Amira." >Amira hugs her by the neck. "Later, grandma." >Alqua walks away. >Amira sips from the bowl. Then speaks. "Anon, do you ever pay attention, from where the wind blows?" >Huh? "The wind, my lady?" >"Thank Goddess you didn't get dropped in Zebrican savannah." >Huh?? >Amira laughs some more. And decides to change topic. >"So, how do you like our stay in the ancestral halls overall?" >You bow. "That is rather fascinating. Especially I like the garden and that the palace seems more lively." 'Except for the gym.' You add to yourself, without voicing it. "I wouldn't reject also a tour to the ancient citadel though." >Amira sighs. >"Sorry, dear. We will have to visit it another time. I'm glad you took liking of our home, but we need to return to Dameascus." "As my lady wishes." >"And since I considered what have you asked me, I wanted to tell you, that I'm also taking Haakim with us." >"I want you to pay attention to him, while attending paperwork. With your suspicious attitude and analytical approach you will have a good influence on him." >You bow, slightly puzzled. So, Haakim has a role in her plans as well? To be continued. Story so far: https://ponepaste.org/92
>>31063 Excellent seeing you again. Now was Amira talking how she could smell Anon hiding that time? I hope you don't mind, but I'll repost this in 4chan's RGRE.

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