I'm voting for Town Bicycle from >>20304 As for mental details, I guess she hates hoofless creatures despite having none herself

>>28621 Sounds fun, I second this

>>28621 I'm going for a more regular pony-shaped protagonist, but I'll add her dislike at hoofless creatures to the character.

>>28632 >I'm going for a more regular pony-shaped protagonist I think I got it

>>28618 Just came up with an OC for this: >called Puffy Business >is a bit larger than Daddy Mccolt but is still a runt >has a Featherwhite mane and dark grey fluffy coat >wears a neck tie with obnoxiously bright colors >is insecure about her lack of color so she tries to make up for it >has a suitcase cutiemark >>28621 >I guess she hates hoofless creatures despite having none herself racism is always a plus.

>>28635 >Puffy Business has to begrudgingly hire creatures as part of DEI laws despite her very racist upbringing >If her mane wasn't white before she swears she would've started seeing grey hairs by now

>>28635 Gonna quickly add that Featherwhite is probably a mistake and an even darker grey might be better for the mane, also forgot the explosive personality, hence "Puffy".

>>28636 >Puffy Business has to begrudgingly hire creatures as part of DEI laws despite her very racist upbringing Brilliant. >If her mane wasn't white before she swears she would've started seeing grey hairs by now Wasn't sure if the white mane was a great idea myself, but I guess it's not so bad.

>>28618 Isn't Equestria the name of a continent and not the whole planet?

Puffy Business is coming together, barely tolerating her workers for the sake of staying in business. What is her business about? Her mane and tail are white, but what's their style?

>>28703 Since you changed the darker coat, you should make their style be all black and professional, with her white coat shining through and even puffing out of whatever it is she wears.

>>28640 I'm not sure. In any case, I originally started dreaming of Horseria as an open-source pony setting that's legally distinct from Hasbro's, but compatible with FiM universe. It's another continent that the ponies have started colonizing only about a generation or so ago, so if this setting was ever to be used for something commercial, the main continent the ponies came from is referred to simply as the maneland. But relevant for this CYOA, it's a land of early settlement, a few bigger cities, and lots of unexplored lands and mysteries.

>>28708 Horseria is weak, you gotta dig deeper into the horse puns for true kino, like Neighraq, or Vietcolt.

>>28707 I didn't actually change anything, I'm just drawing mostly in black and white to keep up the pace. Now that I colored her, I see we need an eye color too. >>28709 Suggestions are welcome. Especially for the main town I've put the most thought into - I've been calling it simply Ponyhaven as a placeholder while looking for a catchier name.

>>28710 She looks familiar...

>>28710 >>28711 Maybe making her coat white wouldn't have been a half bad idea...

>>28711 That's her autistic NEET sister that only speaks in 4hoof memes

>>28717 So they're both racist then?

To keep the game going, I took the liberty of giving her a prim and proper hairstyle and light blue eyes. She's in charge of local branch of the bank - which unfortunately for her comes with a required non-pony quota for workers. That griffon in particular has been wasting hours of her time simply by forcing her to double-check his work for any fowl play. On other news Riverbale has come up as a possible name for the town, so I think we're ready to get the game started.

>>29514 >Riverbale Now your cookin'. >so I think we're ready to get the game started. Fun.

Our story starts in the afternoon, just as Puffy finishes closing the bank for the day. "What a great day that was!" Gerald calls as he waves his goodbyes. "Bye Bye Puffy!" "Yes, it was." Puffy remarks sarcastically, frustrated that she still didn't catch him for any wrongdoings, but is nevertheless relieved to finally get away from the unbearably chipper featherbrain. Taking a deep breath to calm herself, she now has the afternoon entirely to herself. What should she do?

>>29516 Visit the nearest dine-in cakery, and begin fantasising about killing Gerald.

>>29524 Getting her mind off the work, Puffy heads to the Loaf House - Riverbale's one-stop baked goods shop for all things oat and wheat. Trotting along, she imagines what it would be like to shove Gerald into the bakery's oven. "Mwahaha! I love the smell of roast chicken!" "Noo! Please let me out! I'm a good creature, I didn't yet have the chance to do anything!" "Fat chance! I know what you were planning!" "Ooh, curse you and your superior pony intelligence!" Before she even notices she's already at the bakery's door. What is she going to do next?

>>29741 >What is she going to do next? Come inside. Anyway what pastry is her favorite? Only one way to find out, let's buy everything they have!

Kill Jester

Puffy steps in, feeling exceptionally zany. She concludes that her colorful bowtie must be working as advertised. "Rye Whisper, give me one of every type of pastry you have!" "Every type?" Rye asks, "Are you sure about that? How about you start with some marelian pie and I bring you more once you're done? I'd hate to see good food going to waste." Puffy frowns, having already envisioned a cornucopia of pastries in her mind. "Do you know any jesters?" she blurts out of annoyance, not sure where that even came from. "Jesters? No, I don't think I've ever seen one in our little village. Why?" Rye asks, confused.

>>29882 What does she do now?

>>29916 It's only been three days, I'm trying to think.

>>29916 'Ight I got it. She shakes her head and tells Rye that she was just looking for something colorful and funny to brighten her mood after dealing with 'creatures' all day. She then takes her pie and trots her way over to a table furthest from the front entrance.