Would really appreciate whatever critique you can give this, and I'm sure I'll find plenty of mistakes when I reread it as its my first time really putting any effort into writing a fic. It's a rewrite of the greentext, as I felt like just rewriting it from the ground up was a better idea than just rewording it; nowhere near finished, but I don't plan on making it too long either way.
Drip, drip, drip.
Is all that could be heard, as a young Rainbow Dash sat bored and alone in the Cake families dark and rundown basement. Letting out a small "yawn" Rainbow Dash looked down at the slightly damp floor, wondering what could possibly be taking her friend so long to come back after she had left the basement to get what she had called "a special new toy" for some new game that she had came up with.
Dash knew that Pinkie was great at thinking up new games, and trusted her with making them, even if they could seem strange or even just end up being pranks (which she would always get back at her for) but even she wasn't sure about the current one after Pinkie refused to tell her anything about it; all she knew was that she was tied with jump rope to a chair made for foals half-her age and behind a plastic pastel yellow table, with the game probably involving the three also tied-up stuffed animals that surrounded the other sides of the table.
While rocking from side-to-side in boredom, Dash had caught a small glimmer in the eyes of the plushie that sat to the right of her; deciding to stop rocking for a second, and take a closer look at the green rooster plushie that she could have swore was staring at her. "what do you want" Dash said, continuing to look at the rooster that had dared to challenge her to a stare her down.